They Came Back

posted September 6th, 2012, 7:31 am


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December 10th, 2012, 9:33 pm

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In an effort to make newcomers hate my art less, I am redoing the old archive one by one. It will take some time, because I only intend to do one a week, but it should be worth it.
Sure, my art might never get truly amazing, and I still cant draw that last panel (she looks frumpy :( ), but at least its overall much better quality.

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December 10th, 2012, 9:41 pm

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Original, crappy artwork (with a better last panel) found here.
http://wildflowers.smackjeeves.com/comics/1579777/they-came-back/

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May 19th, 2013, 7:32 am

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You redrew this panel, but changed the positioning of the characters and their facial expressions. I liked the original positions and the expressions on their faces better. In the original, the one girl's expression, with her finger gently touching her lips, was really cute. Actually, she was one of the best that you have ever drawn, IMO. But now she is gone, replaced with just an ordinary drawing of her.

Don't get me wrong. You should redo the " crappy " panels and installments as you have time and ability, but keep the good stuff ( which most of what you do, not counting the art style, is good ), and discard only the bad.

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May 19th, 2013, 1:59 pm

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@CuteDress&TwinPonytails: Partially correct. I kept the exact same expressions and physical positions. In this one I removed a person - I will add her back in. I ran out of room in my scan page. Suppose it means I sort of half assed it that way. I will fix that.

But I did keep the same expressions and shapes, just made them 'better'.

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May 19th, 2013, 7:49 pm

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@CuteDress&TwinPonytails: Redid the redo, adding in the extra person. I'm pretty unsatisfied with it, I just cant make it look exactly how I want to. Technically it looks nice, but.. urgh...

Anyways, I hope you like it more than I do.

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