Dinner Time!

posted April 28th, 2013, 2:02 am


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March 18th, 2013, 5:36 am

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Yup. Tony and Toni are splitting apart again.

Tomorrow, everyone gets to find out exactly how bad the physical damage is. Aren't you excited? Wait, you are? Whats wrong with you! Its a teenager, brutally attacked and beaten for being transgendered, hating themselves every second to the point where they refuse medical treatment, and you are excited to find out how physically damaged he is?!

Just kidding, I'm not judging you. I'm slightly curious too, because I haven't written the next part yet. Should be an interesting Monday. One thing for sure - I looked up how to fix a fractured collarbone. I need to learn how to draw a sling :(

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April 28th, 2013, 6:06 am

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In panel 2, Julie and Lexie are whispering. That is shown correctly with small text and letters, but it is too small to actually read, and I do not know how to alter the screen resolution. Please post in this comment section, GreenKrog, as to what they are whispering and saying.

Also, in panel 4, Toni almost has a smile on her face as she sees Lexie for the first time after Tony's suicide attempt. The expressions on both faces were drawn very well, IMO.

In panel 6, Toni gives the implication that they are, at least for now, a GenderFluid Bigenderist, who because of current circumstances or other reasons, changes back and forth between male mode and female mode, or is changing back and forth or is somewhere in between male gender identity/expression and female gender identity/expression.

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April 28th, 2013, 3:15 pm

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@CuteDress&TwinPonytails:
Regarding Panel 2 - I can't post it in the comments for two reasons. The first, Toni can't hear it properly, therefore, it didn't happen. Second, I forgot what I actually wrote, so I couldn't tell you until I got to work where I keep the original anyways.

For Panel 6, its actually a bad thing. When Toni gets into a bad place mentally, its a reversion to boy brain. It isn't fluidity, its still very binary, and an unhealthy one at that.

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December 18th, 2017, 12:53 pm

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“Really? Who is it? Am I allowed to know why?”

“Of course not! That would break the oath! I’m kidding, it’s Toni.”

And I can’t make out the very last bubble either.

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December 18th, 2017, 2:20 pm

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@AmbiguousMouse: "Really? I figured. Lulz."
Are you happy now? With this knowledge? Are you happy with the knowledge that this comment that never happened as a throwaway to prove the point that it could not be heard was written by the author to be sort of messed up but not actually real? There is a lot of meta going on, none of it worth discussing, because it was literally written so small as to not exist.

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