Going Home

posted May 18th, 2013, 2:01 am


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April 6th, 2013, 12:14 am

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So.. yeah.. uh.. frame 2, Bill is inside, and its supposed to like, be a separation between him and Toni with the inside/outside dynamic. It didn't work.

Yes.. that is a single tear on Bill's cheek in the last frame. What a softy.

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May 19th, 2013, 9:24 pm

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He cares more than I thought he would.

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May 24th, 2013, 7:27 am

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Bill seems to care...

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May 24th, 2013, 11:24 am

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@Valley: He does seem to care! At least, for now. Its one thing when a person goes through a literally life/death event. How well would he react to losing a brother and gaining a sister? It is far less tangible, and can be a lot harder to deal with.

@Elessir; How much did you think he would care? I'm quite curious! I didn't know either, until I wrote it, and I still haven't the foggiest as to how he will react to Toni.

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May 25th, 2013, 2:17 am

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The way he came off to me earlier in the strip was that he was somewhat misogynistic, and hovered between disinterest and outright mockery of our hero. I figured he'd be angry, but the wrong kind of angry.

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