Thoughts with Bill

posted May 19th, 2013, 2:01 am


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April 6th, 2013, 12:18 am

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Too much use of the non-bubbled speech? Anyone? Feedback? Buller? Buller?

Wonder how Bill will react if/when he finds out? I don't know yet (because like I said, I usually figure out what Im doing for the week, the week of doing it. Its like reading a book you are writing!).
When I told my brother, he didn't seem to care at all. Like most people in my life that I told, actually. It was like, ok, so.. why do I care, so long as you will be happy now?
Maybe Bill will be like that!

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October 6th, 2014, 8:25 pm

Lex the Kat (Guest)

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The non-bubbled speech in panel 2 doesn't work well, especially when you also use non-bubbles for thought in 4 & 5.

Not saying I didn't read it fine, but my opinion is that it should be one or the other. Thoughts or speech.

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October 6th, 2014, 8:36 pm

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@Lex the Kat: I agree. Fixed.

Did I ever tell you how much I appreciate it when people tell me when I've done something that needs to be fixed, and then I can fix it?

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