Fair Trade (1/2)

posted May 27th, 2013, 2:01 am


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April 12th, 2013, 10:18 pm

GreenKrog

Pt 1/2

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Oh right, a webcomic! Actually, this was a good place to rant, because this is an excellent expository page to the rest of the chapter!
Also, you will notice (and notice you will, dammit) that I am using a lot more scenes where it isn't just two people talking to each other. It was pointed out to me by my ex that most of the previous chapter was two heads in a scene. A little.. dry. So I tried something new! I hope it works. Feedback would be appreciated.

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May 27th, 2013, 6:35 am

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In panel 2, Lexi's legs, shown wearing pants, need to be drawn underneath the table, either standing or sitting down. And Yes, instead of just two heads in a panel, you could from now on have more of a variety with different camera or viewer angles, like in panel 4. That's something that I like about the manga style, that there are always unusual camera angles and viewpoints being shown while the conversation is going on off camera. Occasionally do more like panel 4, it helps to break up the sameness, and adds an interesting style.

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