Journey

posted June 4th, 2013, 2:01 am


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April 18th, 2013, 11:42 pm

GreenKrog

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And now, for some very, VERY different art style for me. I hope it worked and the text path wasn't confusing.

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This is the extremely, EXTREMELY abridged version. There is so much more on the process, but hey, thats kinda what Toni will be going through. So stay tuned for all the gory details.
Hopefully for the non-trans* audience, it was a quick and dirty explanation.

I'd really like feedback on this one, actually.

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June 4th, 2013, 9:02 am

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I understood the order and content of everything fine (though that's 'cause I got some experience :P).

One part confused me, I didn't realize the girl in green was her female self. I thought it was the trans person coming out to the person in green, then the person in green was going through the transition process O.O

but the lines guided me through it ^^

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June 4th, 2013, 8:16 pm

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Then feedback it is ! Once one figures out to follow the swoop marks, the line of thought makes sense. This installment looks more like the shoujo manga ( girl's comics ) style of comic art. That's good, IMO. Today's installment is so much better, at least for variety, than the six panel with two heads in each panel that has been the norm here, and for a lot of American comics, too. I will stay tuned for " all the
gory details " !

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June 4th, 2013, 8:39 pm

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@CuteDress&TwinPonytails: Unfortunately for us all my ability to even draw two heads in a panel is highly suspect on a day-to-day basis. I am certainly doing my best to break up the art, but I'm three months ahead now and I'm lucky if there is even one pnel every two weeks that looks 'different'. Sorry about that :(

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June 4th, 2013, 10:10 pm

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I like how she shoved Toni into the chair. She can't keep ignoring the rest of this.

I used to have no idea what was going on with a trans person. Having become your friend over the last couple years and talking to you about your path, I've done a lot of reading. I know I dont know all the details, but in an effort to know you better I've done some research that Toni's going to have to start doing.

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