Floating

posted June 6th, 2013, 2:01 am


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April 18th, 2013, 11:51 pm

GreenKrog

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Yes, Julie has Lexi in a headlock. She had it coming! She stuck out her tongue at her mother! The nerve!

This page came out really, really.. pastel. Sorry about that. I couldnt find a setting to go through three colours on a blend, so it was either blue to white or blue to eggshell. Snarf.

Also, what the hell frame 1? Disembodies arm much? And then Dan in frame 3? What the hell happened?! The worst part is I'm months ahead in posting now and I am *still* making this mistakes. GRRR.

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June 6th, 2013, 9:19 am

CuteDress&TwinPonytails

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Yes, your perspective is a bit off in panel 3, but I really, really like the picture in panel 1 of Lexi with her tongue stuck out !!!

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June 6th, 2013, 2:15 pm

AliceAcid

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I like Toni's development in those last few pages. It feels like a switch has been turned in her head and now she's set to a new track...as for the art, I know I couldn't do better if I drew at your speed so it's not my place to criticize.

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June 6th, 2013, 7:25 pm

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She looks really hopeful in this. It comes through strongly, your ability to emote how they feel is pretty good. And I like that she's feeling hopeful!

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June 8th, 2013, 2:31 pm

Valley

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She will need the feeling of hope. She should store it up because she will be hitting bumps soon. I mean, she has a whole new life ahead of her, a lot of choices, and that can get scary.

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