It Didn't Work

posted June 30th, 2013, 2:01 am

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May 4th, 2013, 1:42 am



It didn't work? What didn't work. IT didn't work? What is IT? IT? IT?! IT DIDN'T WORK?!
Ah yes, escalation of pronoun usage when referring to the man-bits.

For the record, I couldn't get rid of those fast enough. Nothing felt so wrong and alien to me as having this.. thing.. doing whatever it does.

So, I hate the drawing of every goddamn frame except 1. Frame 1 turned out amazing. Lexi really does the Wendigo Banshee-lord thing well, doesn't she? Wonder what Julie would look like angry?

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June 30th, 2013, 4:39 pm



You don't have to change this installment, but in panel 3, Toni would have looked better if her hand was on her forehead, like she was wiping sweat from her forehead with the back of her hand. That pose would show her exasperation about her upcoming comment. Everything else looks relatively O. K., so don't hate it.

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August 18th, 2013, 7:27 pm



My absolute favorite effect of the hormones. Boobs are a close second, but definitely this first.

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