Scary Truth (1/2)

posted July 13th, 2013, 2:01 am


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May 11th, 2013, 4:49 am

GreenKrog

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*ahem*
DO NOT LIE TO YOUR DOCTORS.
They are trying to fix a machine that they can't access the inner workings of. DO NOT LIE TO THEM!

On an art note, this entire week is my f***ing up everything to do with Dan, so, yeah. I did as much as I could in post-production to fix it. I don't know what my problem was. Sorry. Really, sorry.

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July 13th, 2013, 3:18 am

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But overall I think your art is improving and moreover, you are able to draw characters that look the same on each new page, continuity is very hard imo

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July 13th, 2013, 6:36 am

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In panel 2, Dan's word balloon is pointing to Toni, when it should point to Dan.

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July 13th, 2013, 5:24 pm

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@CuteDress&TwinPonytails: Fixed, thanks for the heads up.

Luckily it was for a day I get to be free of the hospital, so I get a quick turnaround.

I always appreciate it when you give me feedback, even if I cant fix it. As you'll see in the coming months, your input has drastically improved my art.

@AliceAcid: Like I said about, it really is getting better. The characters almost look like the characters they look like, most of the time. Hard to go wrong with that!
Thanks for sticking around through the art malarky.

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July 13th, 2013, 11:02 pm

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Your comment about fucking up everything with Dan made me start to panic, wondering what I had forgotten, until I remembered that his name is Dan, too. xD

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August 18th, 2013, 9:10 pm

wraithoffire

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I think Dan is slipping into the dialect of his home country in the first panel a bit. I'm not sure how you'd say imrpoving either :P

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August 19th, 2013, 1:01 am

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@wraithoffire: If you say it in a long southern drawl it almost becomes a word. Though irmpoving sounds closer in a long drawl.
Yeah, I can't justify that one.

What country do you think Dan comes from? What kind of last name is Bernt, anyways? I always thought it was Jewish, but Googling has been less than helpful (it thinks its German, so, maybe it IS Jewish from the early centuries?). I always assumed he was from Alberta, but now I'm really not sure. I do know where Julie is from though!

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August 20th, 2013, 3:13 pm

wraithoffire

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I don't know why, but I would think German, somewhere down the line. Probably not 100%, but at least a quarter. Born and raised in Canada.

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