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posted October 25th, 2013, 2:01 am


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June 22nd, 2013, 5:37 am

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Look at that last panel. Just look at it. Remember that time that I drew that person running and it looked like a person running? What the hell happened to the person who did that? I want to be that person again.
Ok, yeah, I'm going to stop talking about my personal life now and focus on the comic. Sorry if there are typos this week.

Edit: So I'm doing that whole shading thing, and you might be wondering why is it coming up from below. If you have never been in a very snowy area, the answer is simple: you can actually get more light coming up from the snow than you do down from above. It's the weirdest thing, but it causes snow blindness. So yeah, it is coming from below. And yes, I am fully aware that Dan is basically impossible to fix. Deal with it. I'm trying. Hard.

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October 25th, 2013, 6:42 am

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Panic from the last hospital visit... :(

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October 25th, 2013, 8:54 am

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So now I'm back to being an art critic. Panel 6 is indeed bad. It looks like Tony is running up a ladder, instead of running down the sidewalk. The perspective of larger to smaller to show distance is done well, but the angle of the sidewalk is wrong. It should be drawn, not as down to up and getting smaller, but as flat, but wide to narrow, and then getting smaller. The sidewalk would look like flat train tracks, wide in the foreground, flat, and getting narrow as one looks toward the horizon and where the train tracks disappear. Also show speed marks drawn from Tony's back, to show movement. Dan isn't great, he will do as drawn.

The way that Tony begins to cry, as Dan becomes more and more insistent, and as the stress becomes greater and greater during the conversation, that was done very well. I like how that kind of personal grief was drawn. I hope this helps.

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October 25th, 2013, 4:09 pm

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@CuteDress&TwinPonytails: What I lack in artistic ability I make up for in highly derivative quasi-emotional story.

You'd think being Autistic and emotionless that it would be the other way around. But no.

Meh, tonight you get the best shadows I've ever done, so, at least there is that.

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