Believable/Protector (2/2)

posted December 3rd, 2013, 2:02 am


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June 29th, 2013, 7:29 am

GreenKrog

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This is a strong deviation from RMitch. I'm pretty sure he would let someone beat him to death rather than raise a hand to protect himself. Dude is such a softie. And yet right now he is working security for a university. Then again, I think he would kill rather than allow a friend to come to harm.

Did you catch the slip-up? Yeah. That happened. Smiley face.

Edit: I added the impact lines explody thingy to frame 3. People have been asking for it for a while. You can now see why I don't add explody line thingies.

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December 3rd, 2013, 11:53 am

CuteDress&TwinPonytails

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" Explody line thingies " are good, you should use them more often, IMO.
I love Annie's facial expression in panel 1 changing to that of panel 2. Well done !

And so, among the two, who is the better Protector, the one most interested in Annie's ultimate well being ? Mitch or Bill ? Interesting to contemplate, but my vote goes for Mitch, because " family " many times almost never understands the ultimate good to be had when a family member begins to transition to their correct gender !

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December 3rd, 2013, 12:55 pm

Renee (Guest)

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If "She" Continues this! Oh Bill , Do you even realize it?

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December 4th, 2013, 11:10 am

Valley

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@Renee: I missed that the first time - thanks for pointing that out...

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December 4th, 2013, 9:35 pm

Elessir

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He's winning the battles but losing the war.

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