Return of the Maiden

posted December 9th, 2013, 2:01 am


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July 28th, 2013, 3:15 pm

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//begin 7/28/2013 postings. Total: 75 pages//

Frame 4: Freeverse poetry usually bugs me. I like how jam-smacked with metaphors it gets, but the lack of rhyming tends to get to me.

What the hell is Sophie's problem? Mitch it already bleeding, yet she attacks him? Clearly there is a miscommunication here.

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December 9th, 2013, 2:46 am

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I'm sure Mitch is a great guy, but he kinda seems like an ass in this page with claiming all women in the city are psychos, and hitting on Andrea seems bad not only because she is visibly uncomfortable but because of the state he is in at the moment.

Not to say other people aren't jumping to conclusions though.

*hug*

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December 9th, 2013, 6:55 am

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Whoa. Whats wrong with calling Andrea pretty? Thats a compliment, and he's clearly not bugging her after she asked for space.

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December 9th, 2013, 1:37 pm

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Maybe Sophie needs a time out?

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