Awake

posted February 17th, 2014, 2:01 am


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August 10th, 2013, 8:50 pm

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Hard to tell if that was a confession of panic, guilt, or fear that you'll never get a chance to say it again.

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February 17th, 2014, 2:41 am

PattyM (Guest)

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Ummmmm.... Decreasing the size of the type to show Anne fading into unconsciousness is a good way to show it.

BUT even zoomed in the last two lines in panel 4 are too tiny for these old eyes. Please be gracious and tell me what they say.

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February 17th, 2014, 3:08 am

Saru (Guest)

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I Think it says "We don't know if he will make it"

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February 17th, 2014, 3:10 am

Ariensus (Guest)

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@PattyM: It says "We don't know if he will make it."

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February 17th, 2014, 3:57 am

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@PattyM: The last two lines were supposed to be unreadable, but display as 'Julie is talking about Bill'. So.. the fact that anyone could read it is.. something. So the transcript;
Annie: What about Bill?
Julie: Oh hun, sweetie, Bill is..
He is still critical
We don't know if he is going to make it.

Saru and Ariensus, you both either have crazy good eyesight or you are just much more dedicated that you should be! Now I have to figure out how to make things look like text but are actually unreadable, lest you two spoil things for everyone again :)

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February 17th, 2014, 7:58 am

A (Guest)

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Whoa,
I could read the second-last line with some effort, but reading the last line must have been a combination of guessing by context and checking word lengths to confirm it.

I guess if you really want to just have text that's unreadable you can use the "lorem ipsum" texts to guarantee it

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February 17th, 2014, 1:54 pm

PattyM (Guest)

Ah so.

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Thanks. I wasn't sure if it was actually just unreadable gibberish for artistic reasons.

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February 17th, 2014, 6:42 pm

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I had to zoom in to read the last line. I'm glad Annie survived, and I'm glad she's finally told her dad.

I'll admit I've had a hard time liking Bill, but he definitely didnt deserve to be stabbed and left to die. Hope he recovers =/

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