I just realized that speech bubble from Bill in frame 3 looks like its coming from inside the shower. I don't know how to fix it.
Confused about the content of 5 and 6?
To summarize - young men occasionally have the strong urge to.. ahem.. utilize their parts for pleasure. Frame 5, Annie is being assaulted by this offensive.. THING.
Frame 6, she realizes that as much as she hates it, maybe she could let herself go and.. *ahem* think about Vic?
Maybe, for the speech bubble, make it slightly more vertical and place it so it appears to be coming from offscreen in the lower left?
Did whoever it was hang up before she said about not being able to make it? *chews knuckles*
Shower bubble - thanks for clearing that up.. maybe lines instead of bubble like //shout// kinda thing - I'd have to draw it.
As for the ahem: it's a subject that doesn't get much air time but I think you dealt with it well. It does cause a lot of distress, which is the opposite of what it should be. It should be a happy thing, that reminds you how good it is to be alive but, no, another thing to spark off tears and dysphoria.... we're a mess huh? :(((
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