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posted September 26th, 2018, 12:01 am


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January 31st, 2018, 10:16 pm

GreenKrog

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Well THAT took 6 years.

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September 26th, 2018, 2:48 am

Shaeyna

Thank you

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The journey has been well worth it.

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September 26th, 2018, 8:46 am

mj6373

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This is an incredibly powerful moment, and I’m only doing this because you’ve mentioned in previous pages that you like it when readers do, so:
In panel three, the first “now” should probably be a “not”
In panel 5, “there is only so much that I can be done” should probably be either “there’s only so much I can do” or “there’s only so much that can be done”, or perhaps “that I can be doing,” but even that is odd.

Anyway... this is an amazing emotional triumph. It feels a bit sudden, narratively speaking, but from a human perspective, it’s much more common that epiphanies like this come on suddenly, from a build-up of small and seemingly-unconnected large things that’s finally coalesced, rather than from some big transcendental moment in life.

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September 26th, 2018, 3:21 pm

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... Did I miss a strip?

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September 26th, 2018, 3:41 pm

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@mj6373: FUCK. NOPE. SPOILERS APPARENTLY BECAUSE IM AN IDIOT.

I hate my own work so much.

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September 26th, 2018, 5:12 pm

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Well I love your work! But I also hate everything I’ve ever written, so I understand the feeling. And hey, you have a goddamn thirty-four week buffer, it’s not idiotic to occasionally flip the order of a couple of events around in your head so long after creating the strips in question.

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